I really like the highlights you've used here, although I wish you'd used thinner lines of white for highlights on the hair, because I think that'd fit in really well with the highlights you'd used on the face. In a similar manner, I think the lightest part of his forehead looks a little out of place, I think the slightly darker shade would have worked better all over.
I REALLY love how much detail you put into the dreads, they could have looked so crap if you'd half-assed the details, but you didn't, and I think they look awesome.
The tongue is just weirdly sexy, love LOVE how you did the saliva.
The only thing I don't really like is that you used a light blue for the disintergration, it might have worked better for me if you'd made the ...blobs... darker the further they went down.
Overall though, I think this works very well, A++++ FOR AWESOMENESS 8D
I hope so because if this art thing doesn't work out I don't have anything to fall on. I already decided that I have to use for physical activity because I'm an ARTIST -dramatic pose, falls out of chair- (I've also decided I'm not running the mile this year. The only way there going to get me to run is with fucking zombies. Too bad there in short supply. )
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I REALLY love how much detail you put into the dreads, they could have looked so crap if you'd half-assed the details, but you didn't, and I think they look awesome.
The tongue is just weirdly sexy, love LOVE how you did the saliva.
The only thing I don't really like is that you used a light blue for the disintergration, it might have worked better for me if you'd made the ...blobs... darker the further they went down.
Overall though, I think this works very well, A++++ FOR AWESOMENESS 8D
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